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The Fifth Gate
« Thread Started on Jan 27, 2008, 11:39am »

Oke

this is the story on which I'm working now, it is going to be a book, serie, more than only one book... I was only thinking if the idea was a good idea

The Fifth Gate: The Knights of Jewantes and the Streets of Haze

the story divided in two parts, in the two parts it is a story about a boy, the first one is a magician the other one is not.

the story is playing in a strange world called the Fifth Dimension, this dimension is also connected with our world. In the Fifth Dimension people are at war with each other, the Demons and other bad races against races like Humans and Elves. for730 years the high Demon lord Varamathras attacks the Good Races with his DracoMancers, the good races fight back with their Magician group the Knight of Jewantes.

The book is called "de Vijfde poort" or in english the Fifth Gate, the book existes of two parts, both telling the story of young children living in the war. they aren't effected by it, but they are becoming part of a journey to stop the war for once and for all.

Part one: De Ridder van Jewantes, The kinghts of Jewantes
The first part is about Zertos a young magician studying on the Jewantes school, he has a rich dad and that's why he as a magician comes there. but when a child becomes a puber the magic in his body releases its powers, Young Zertos gets a magic form that had been died out. at the same time one of the children from his class is making plans to get the greatest weapon on earth in its hands, Notelah was once a friend of Zertos but now he is working for the goddess of Trouble and gets the whole class in trouble. Their teacher Master Neo is hiding a lot of information for them. they travell throught the Dwarflands by dragons to get to their mission but thanks to Notelah, he and Master Neo fall out of the sky and the mission is lay down.

Part 2: De Straten van Haze, The streets of Haze
Danzell has four friends and together they live in the city of Haze, has friends Orin, Hama, Griswold and Ruto all belong to other gangs, Orin, Hama and Griswold are loyal to Epril and Ruto doesn't belong to any gang. Danzell is a Flamegang Member. they wander around in the city, trying to find a way to get out of it. Danzell's dream is to stop the gang war which has killed his father but something is coming between. The Shini, people who once were living but now are death and walking around, these Shini need to get something down which didn't work when they were still living. The Shini are the first leaders of the gangs they are looking for their Dwa and it seemed that Danzell and his friends are them but there are somethings that need to be done before the Shini are able to get the friends with them.

First Part: Main happening
the main happening is around the end, Zertos' powers relise and he gets in a figth with his friends, killing a few of them. All thanks to the sword which Notelah wanted, it turn Zertos into the monster of Ruby magic and no one, not even a DracoMancer is able to get it away from him.

Second Part: Main happening
Danzell, Ruto, Orin, Griswold and Hama are going to save an magician because of Dord (leader of the gang called -Epril-) wants that. they save him but get in a fight in the castle, Orin in captured and the gang leaders now have an excuse to deal with the lord of Haze once and for all.

Ideas for more books:
Second Book: Thiefs and Demons, Dieven en Duivels... this book is about the search for the last Ruby, Saphire and Emerald magicians. only Zertos will come in this book, also Notelah who flee at the end of book 1 will come back
Third Book: Serbyel and Stronghold, Serbyel en Stronghold...
Fourth Book: Liviohon and Bethecm
Fifth Book: HagaFosiel and Yartihn

« Last Edit: Jan 27, 2008, 11:49am by galadas »

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